You are the days at the beach,
the diamond in my necklace,
the bloodline of royalty.
You are forever in my heart.
You are the christmas wrapping,
the minute before a speech,
the last number in a countdown.
You are excitement in my fingertips.
You are a new born baby,
the wedding march’s tune,
the reunion of a soldier.
You are joy in my soul.
You are a concentration headache,
the calloused fingertips,
the view of the finish line.
You are the determination in my will.
You are the guard that doesn’t move,
the great wall of China,
the safe that I belong in.
You are the protector in my eyes.
You are the dawn and dusk,
the importance of winning,
the rotate of my earth.
You are everything in my life.

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January 23, 2008 at 6:10 pm
gerbernwo
Wow! love this Jo!!
January 23, 2008 at 8:49 pm
shenkewo
Wow, Jo… that is wonderful. So original and it says so many things I never had words for.
You nailed it! <3
January 24, 2008 at 12:32 am
crogerswo
wow! twas really good Jo
January 27, 2008 at 11:04 pm
mschroederwo
I have to say that this is very well done! It is very different view of examples I think and they work well together. Great job!
January 30, 2008 at 11:32 pm
fritty little
I like it! Very nicely done Jo!
February 5, 2008 at 3:26 pm
lstrausswo
wow thats really really great! I love how you included so many things that are amazing and things that just leave you speech less. I also like how you describle this person not by there characteristics but rather usi9ng things and nature to describe what they mean to you! I Love it ! its aweosme!
February 5, 2008 at 3:44 pm
Victoria Dobson
Woah! That was really great!! I would have never of thought to use some of the examples you used! Like for example ‘the last number in a countdown’ or ‘the view of the finish line.’ AWESOME!
February 9, 2008 at 4:12 am
kbeamwo
I really like this!! You talked about a bunch of different things but still related them to each other. And I just got image after image reading this! LOVED it!